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Posted on 12-01-11 5:49 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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भन्नु त धेरै थियो
सुन्नु ने धेरै थियो
तर ऐले समय छैन
Call me after 9

घर फोन नगरेको मैनौ भयो कस्को कस्तो छ थाहा नभको धेरै भयो
किन कि म bg छु americanized भको छु
म सँग time छैन कसै सँग धित मारेर कुर गर्न लाई
एक छिन बसेर खुलेर हस्न लाई
काम काम काम अनी part-time पढाई
खै पुर्शद मलाई कसै सँग खुलेर बोल्न लाई
के गर्ने talk time नै छैन
call me after 9

यहाँ त बोल्ने time नि fixed हुदो रएछ
पैसा तिरेर plan किन्न पर्ने रएछ
जती बोल तेती धेरै पैसा
बोल्न ने पैसा तिर्न पर्ने
के गर्ने सँगइ बसेर कुर गर्ने time छैन
mobile मा कल गर
तर call call me after 9

घर को भात कस्तो हुन्छ स्वाद नै बिर्सी सको
mcdonald को menu भन्दिउ कन्थै भइ सको
dating पनि हिजो आज fast tract भको छ
घुम्न जाने टाईम छैन
text बाटै भेट्नु पर्य छ
के गर्ने उस्को र मेरो talk time नै छैन
सो darling call me after 9

साथी छ कहाँ छ थाहा छैन
उ पनि bg छ म सँग त time नै छैन
कैले कही फोन गर्छ
ए ऐले bg छु म
call me after 9

हिजो एउता साथी बिरामी परेछ
दिन भर थला परेर ओछ्यान मा सुतेछ
थाहा त बिहानै पाको थे
बिचरा ले आँफै फोन गरे थो
तर म bg थे
manager कराउदै थो
हत्त पत्त भनि हाले
ओइ ऐले म bg छु
(बाचिस भने )
call me after 9

सँगइ appatment मा दिदी दाई छन
भाई कता छ भनेर फोन गर्छन्
२-४ दिन भो मुख नदेखेको
appartment नै छोडेर गइस कि क्याहो रे
मैले भने ऐले २ shift काम गर्दै छु
तपाईं हरु सुते पछी कोठा मा आउछु अनी सब उथ्नु भन्दा अगाडि जान्छु
ऐले boss सँगइ छ
call me after 9

घर बाट फोन आउछ
rest-room भन्दै बहिर निस्कन्छु
ए भाई ऐले काम मा छु
talk time नि छैन
एसो गर न है
call me after 9

 
Posted on 12-01-11 6:28 PM     [Snapshot: 103]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Awesome!! Should have posted after 9pm though 



 
Posted on 12-01-11 6:39 PM     [Snapshot: 137]     Reply [Subscribe]
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 Kabita padhna ta man lagya thyo, 
Tara K garnu Ahile time nai chaina,
I will read it after 9
 
Posted on 12-01-11 6:48 PM     [Snapshot: 161]     Reply [Subscribe]
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बहुत मिठो, मार्मिक अनि यथार्थपरक प्रस्तुति अमेरिकाने साथी .....
धेरै पछी स्वादिलो कविता पढ्न पाइयो ..
के गर्नु आफूलाई पनि आजकल त्यस्तै पर्या छ
Call me after 9 भन्नु पर्याछ
 
Posted on 12-01-11 7:05 PM     [Snapshot: 285]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Ok bro....l call u after 9
 
Posted on 12-01-11 7:13 PM     [Snapshot: 303]     Reply [Subscribe]
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गज्जब
 
Posted on 12-01-11 9:18 PM     [Snapshot: 507]     Reply [Subscribe]
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 Dammi cha bro
 
Posted on 12-02-11 2:06 AM     [Snapshot: 642]     Reply [Subscribe]
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(bachis bhane) call me after 9, lol
 
Posted on 12-02-11 2:21 AM     [Snapshot: 647]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Another epic one by amricane after " ghanta hanne ghanta jasto"....enjoyed it!!
 
Posted on 12-02-11 12:49 PM     [Snapshot: 866]     Reply [Subscribe]
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सदा झैँ यथार्थ बर्णन,
Welcome Back Americane

 
Posted on 12-02-11 12:59 PM     [Snapshot: 881]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Last edited: 25-Jan-12 12:35 PM

 
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Posted on 12-04-11 8:37 PM     [Snapshot: 1373]     Reply [Subscribe]
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 हैन हो शनिबार र आइतबार त before 9 कल गर्दा नि त हुन्छ नि, कल आउँछ कि भनेर कुरेर बस्यो कल नै आउँदैन यार....

ल आज कल नगर्ने हो भने भोली चाँही call me after 9 है
 
Posted on 12-06-11 9:17 AM     [Snapshot: 1534]     Reply [Subscribe]
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सर्बप्रथम मेरो सानो रचना मन पराइ दिनु भएको मा मेरा सम्पूर्ण साझा बासी मित्र हरु मा धन्यवाद। तपाईं हरु को अमुल्य सुझाब नै मेरो रचना का पथ प्रदसक हुन।
म कबिता धेरै कम लेख्छु तेइ भएर सदै हाल्दिन तर बाचा गर्छु तपाईं हरु समु सदै केइ न केइ ( राम्रो या नराम्रा्ओ) रचना लिएर आउछु ।
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