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@Perfectionist Thank you for the interest. I was so impatient to get the first piece out that it became short. I will strive to increase the length in the next part. 

nice start !

when r u screeening the next episode ? :D

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hahahaha.. nice unfolding of characters. luved the way u described Yojana, dats a sweet name, btw.

took me back to my school days. plz do not stop coz there are silent readers out there as well.. look at the views, waiting for more.

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@Perfectionist Thank you. With reference to the end of the story I haven't written it yet and haven't thought how it is going to end.

thats gr8 plz keep writing. yo ta readers ko euta normal bahanaa po ho ta.. to make sure stories dont have as expected ending . sorry if u got offended. peace

@ Perfectionist I am not offended at all. I was just addressing your concern.

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wohhhoo.. wow!! marvelous.. superb! luved it man! when yonjana said I love u, i thought wow, dat wat easy but just to know later that was a dream. well written.

was eagerly waiting for the story and it ended in style. loved it, really!

thanks for the story.

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Santosh Ji,

In fact, I love literature and I am planning to graduate in Literature. It was a while ago, I saw the starting part of your story or novella: whatever you call it. After a long time, I saw a good potential in a Nepalese guy to write succh an influencial story on sajha.com. Definitely, you had a good start as well as good end but still some part of the story is hidden. What did Rohit did after Yojana passed away? How Jivan came to the story and when they fall in love? Since, you are the narratoe of the story, you lacked all those facts and investigation was incomplete.

I am a great fan of yours from today. Let me know if you gonna write another too. And for obvious, I am watching you on facebook too. At first, I thought it was the story about yourself.....but since many characters kept on popping in and out, I was confused. Even on facebook..... I am so interested to read about your status....... some marlboro lights....and budlight.. Keep it up and better try write in nepali onwards. You really have a great potential of writing. One of my friends is the greatest fan of you. She always come to me to talk about you. What if she wants to be in a relationship with you?

Naulo Paribesh

"Bideshi syau bhanda swodesi naspati mitho hunchha," Jai Nepal.

@grgDai and Perfectionist Thank you for the comments.

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