-- I treasure you as our friendship is a gift,
I look for you when the spirits need a lift.
Grateful, affectionate and cherised like gold,
our friendship won't taint or ever turn old-------

Wow loved those lines.  keep sharing ---

 

NKC, excellent! Very true for the best friend

Nepche bro, you are f.a.n.t.a.s.t.i.c yaar

great nepche

"You'll always be there, I know that is true,
also I'll always be here, ever for you."--- wow nkchora, another praise worthy piece and must be dedicated to your true friend.  keep'em coming.

Pjna,

Glad to hear that you loved those lines. Thank you very much for those supportive note.  Oh yeah, when is your next story coming? Haven't read anything from you for a while.

Kancha,

I convey my gratitude to you for the boosting comment. I really appreciate it.

Jhilke bro,

Thanks a ton for your support. I am happy that you liked those lines.

Thulee,

Thank you very much for your encouragement.

Dipika,

I should express my deep sense of gratitide to you for those insipiring remarks. Yes, you are absolutely right. These lines are dedicated to a "true" friend of mine. Thanks 

nas

Good job, dude. Keep sharing.

niceeeeeeee, someone's real talented!. I  dunno how people write poems.......The only poem i know/remember goes like this-

1 2 3 4 5
once i caught a fish alive
6 7 8 9 10
then i let it go again
y did u let it go
'coz it bite my finger so
which finger did it bite
this little finger on the right. I'm sure u'll love it

timrokura,

Thanks for the dropping by to drop a word.

Yakku,

Unique nick you got.  Is the nick inspired by "Krur Singh" from "Chandrakanta"? Thank you very much  for the generous note.

Aviator,

Thanks a ton for the praise. I am glad that you liked those verses. Wow..a real nice poem, you remember there. I liked it very much.  You just need to play around a bit with the words, it's not hard to come up with something that rhymes.  Next time I see you here in sajha, you gotta bring something that rhymes with you. That's an assignment.

Nepche, good poem! keep going!

Alright! i finished my assignment.......

A for Apple
B for Ball
C for Chapel
D for Doll
My art in writing poems is null
and that's all!

and tht krur singh frm chandrakanta.......i was impressed by him so much th i'd named my mother yakku.had got some serious beatings for tht(sandals)...used to be an avid watcher of chandrakanta...

 

All three stranzas are too good. I just love them. Keep writing Nepal ko Chhora ji ...

I wish I had a best friend who wrote such nice poem for me..no such luck..utterly butterly delicious..:)

Chitre,

Thank you very much for your kind note, brother. If time permits, I promise to bring more pieces in coming days.

Aviator,
Wow..that's quick. Good job, I will give you 10/10 for that.  

"A for Aviator gurl, B for big-Boeing,
Just read ur poem, that's really good going.
It rhymes well and sounds like a song.
Next time you write, make it a bit long.
Your short yet sweet slice made my noon,
looking forward to reading more from you soon. "

And, thanks for adding chandrakanta humor to the thread.

Sadhana,

Thank you very much for those boosting annotation. I am happy that you liked those stanzas.

Sndy Dijyu,

Thank you very much for those "utterly butterly delicious" remarks. I really appreciate it.  Hmm..let me see if I can come up with something for "Sister".

LOL, people were talking about my nick. Yes, my nick is inspired from the famous Chandrakanta serial. I just wanted to make it "unique". 

Haha aviator, aama lai yakku re. Yakku doesn't sound "girly", does it?  

Nepche, that's true. I like these lines.

Just being there, through hassle and grind;
all just to say, you are my "best" friend.

Ufri,

I am glad to hear that you liked those lines. Thank you very much for dropping by to drop a comment and lift the spirit.