THEN I LEARNT THERE WAS ST. VALENTINE

Enthralled in the hidden eternal twilight
curtailed dreams of despairness persisted…
...blinded the faith….
obviated the macabre
But suddenly…
….she came unto me…
erased all the grimaces
visage n soul enlighted ……

her face so cherubic…
..the night sky hides gently on her lashes
as she tries to sway her locks
dewdrops fell on her rosy cheeks
and formed stars in her eyes
moon looks down..
…….to kiss her crimson lips…….

Elusive was the destination…
……tiring was the day….
all the dreams shattered along the way…
kiss of death followed our way…….
vision was blinded……loud noise persisted
all I remember….
she pulled me out….…
…..tears rolled on her eyes…..
even before I said goodbye

Memory vanished …maybe I died
woke up to see her pale face fly
she was not ….alas! I was still alive
Then I learnt there was St. Valentine

JPT! Atleast this is some romantic crap among all the other crappy threads!

gazzab !!!

i seem to be stalking wateva :-D

I was gonna say the same thing! I love being cyber stalked by Cerine! :P

LOL I am so funny... I sometimes make myself laugh out loud.

YOU really ARE hilarious :-D

it's amazin

NIce poem :D

thanks rhythm

Very nice indeed.....i just don't remember if i read it or not

:-S

AEUTIKT'z trippin :-)

AutiKT date jaane haina....

I need some lessons to be a poet as well.:)

Nice Indeed!

I ain't trippin :-S

and i ain't goin to no date either

AeutiKT kya risako ...abuiiiiii........dherai risako bhaye watch this video...

http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=-6672320499477782739&q=gaijatra

haipi vantin diwas

was that supposed to make me laugh in any way???? :-S

gazzab,

AeutiKT is going on a date... ain't and no... dbl negation means positive (O:

dont' butt in thapa ji :-D let the man figure it out on him own re kya:-P

thank u thapaji and flip-flop......
AetuKT ......i donno bout double negative or single positive...whateve ..who cares....
hey k ho.....that gaijatra video didn't make u laugh........amazing..