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Posted on 03-01-05 6:47 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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The eyes wonder in the darkness that prevails,
Not a beam of light it detects,
It searches forever for a soothing sight,
But no where can it find the healing light.

Memories and darkness is all thats left,
Who can one blame though for this theft?
The bliss and happiness all gone away,
Only on misery and agony the heart can lay.

A breeze blows softly bringing memories to mind,
Of laughter and smiles that is now left behind,
A dagger on the heart feels hard and heavy,
Tears flow from the eyes and the heart bleeds softly.

A relationship that was so pure and devine,
Still turns the heart warm and makes the eyes shine,
But the pain soon follows and the eyes weep again,
Going back to the darkness and to the pain.

The wind of sorrow had blown into life,
Cutting into the heart with the sharpest knife,
The sweet dreams, the whispered promises!
All lies.. all treachery, it was all blindness!!

The future ahead seems bleak, the past all narrow,
All I have left is my lonliness and sorrow!!
 
Posted on 04-17-05 8:10 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Well i know you from a friend of mine who happens to be your friend...bhok lagyo re?...sounds familiar hai? ;)
 
Posted on 04-17-05 8:33 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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hehehe, i know the friend, and that friend, is your friend...
im confused!!
 
Posted on 04-17-05 10:06 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Nice one but long sentence uses..not my type...keep it coming anj...U got it...
 
Posted on 04-19-05 9:30 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Oki one more... and Red, newuser, nirman.. thanks....
one more I have

The sun shines bright, the air all warm,
A surprise I might find today in mother nature's arm.
Mischevious eyes waiting for somthing to come
So far away.. but feeling right at home.
The river sings to me the tales of its heart,
of the faces it has seen and the stories from the far.
Engrossed I sit on the lap of my mother,
Soft breeze telling me, she also finds me close to her!!

Many like me have come and gone,
But mother tells me she remembers everyone.
The little boy who had dreamt of tomorrow,
The boy who had laughed and died without sorrow.
Never knowing what had taken dear life away,
He was smiling even when death was here to stay.

Mother tells me to her all lives are equal and devine,
Even the lives of people who's eyes have gone blind.
The people who took the boy's life away,
Are as special to her as the sun is to day!!

She smiles and tells me of the brave little heart,
Who had not blinked an eye while with her life she had to part.
While the flames of death wanted to consume her brother,
She did not run away or think any longer.
To the devil with the gun she sacrificed her life,
Not with a frown, but with a smile.

But now in mother's eyes I see sorrow,
As she looks at me with tears on her brow.
"The devil who sat there with a gun,
I am shamed to admit is also my son.

My love for him was as much and as pure,
What I have done wrong, I am not sure.
Every now and then I see some of my children
With eyes full of sorrow, their life like a burden.
For ages I have seen them grow together,
Then comes a day when they fight each other.

When I gave birth they were all the same,
But as they grew their heart burns with a flame.
Some of their fire is as soothing as a song,
But other hearts burn with hatred so wrong!!
I have lived long and am fatigued my daughter,
To see all my children killing each other!!"

This part of mother I had never imagined,
Her eyes so sad and her brows so wrinkled.
The river now seemed like the tears she had cried,
The wind laughing at the failure of her tries.
The sun had now set, darkness engulfed the world,
"This my daughter is my story untold!!"
 
Posted on 04-19-05 9:51 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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anj
whenever i start reading ur peom...
i start flowing in ur words,emotion,feelings..
special time ma matrai padchu ma ur poem..

as usual its good:)
 
Posted on 04-19-05 11:49 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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The world is burning, my country is too.....touched my soul ANJ...U got the touch..write more...
Nirman
 
Posted on 04-20-05 12:15 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Anju Jee,
Nice poems as usual.
Hope to see more from you.
 
Posted on 04-20-05 8:49 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Ruina, Nirman and dada giri, thanks for reading my poem... and aprreciating it.. I will surely try to write more :)
 
Posted on 04-20-05 9:25 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Anj,
Your last poem is beautiful. Please allow me to add few of my verses with that of yours.
I'm taking this liberty with the hope that you would not take it anything other than an informal eulogize. And yes, keep em' coming.

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"The river now seemed like the tears she had cried,
The wind laughing at the failure of her tries."

Shedding blood, not tears from the eyes,
Watching as brothers performed last rites;
When he himself had his promises denied.
Oh! how our mother had silently cried.

"The sun had now set, darkness engulfed the world,
"This my daughter is my story untold!!"

But when tomorrow comes with morning sunshine,
I shall embrace you all with open arms of mine;
With the dawn, I'll pray for your nous,
As we move from a grisly chaos.
(To the new beginning).........



 
Posted on 04-20-05 11:50 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Posted on 04-20-05 11:59 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Indisguise.. the lines you added are really nice and touching... :)
specially the last lines about a new begining... i wonder y I cant think of new beginings.. thanks:)
 
Posted on 04-20-05 12:14 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Tweets :)
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Anj, TY.
Often we are so engulfed and surrounded by 'greek tragedies' that we forget that we need to keep our eyes/mind/heart 'open' to see/feel the new begining.

Perhaps picturesque scenario has eluded us for far too long, thus glumness has overtaken. I suggest read the thread "is it not what we feel often" or something like that. I bet it will refresh you and THEN you will see a new begining. Hehehehe. But proceed with CAUTION.

Nevertheless, your poems has a soul ( bhaneko you write it by heart), mine are just a nonsensical outpouring of unfelt emotions more often than not.
Bich bich ma twaacha ke. Hehe. Hope to hear more of your creations.

Indisguise:)
 
Posted on 04-21-05 3:10 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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>>Nevertheless, your poems has a soul ( bhaneko you write it by heart), mine are just a nonsensical outpouring of unfelt emotions more often than not.
--beleive me Indi...ur also seems to me through ur heart showing the rays of hope..May i see more of ur works??
Nirman
 
Posted on 04-21-05 3:15 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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babbbal poems.... applauds... to all of you..
gotta love a good writing..
 
Posted on 08-10-05 11:30 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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I guess this is my first successful try to write something with a positive ending. Though this poem is not good. Just some mumblings and jumblings!

Closing my eyes with a hope of tomorrow
Thinking not of the dark pitch of sorrow.
Happy once but sad yet again
On went the cycle and on went the pain.

Sadness deep inside but the reason unknown
Emptiness throughout yet the heart not torn!
Accompanied by all but feeling all alone
Liked by everyone yet loved by none!

Trying to discover the dream of ecstasy,
A tinge of hope, an unknown fantasy.
The heart yearned and the eyes searched forever
Wondering what it might discover.

Believing something was destined to be,
Confident to find the future ultimately!
Not caring was 'was' or what 'exists',
Mind all set on what will persist!

All life gone away as an unfulfilled dream,
Yet not realizing what a waste it had been.
Always emphasized on what 'would be'
Life spent away as a voyage to destiny.

Never realizing the beautiful things,
Never saw the flower bloom or heard the bird sing.
Never felt the love in his eyes for me,
Nor knew the hurt of being dismissed.

Life always was what I thought it to be,
A burden on the back or a world full of glee.
But on a search for my tomorrow,
I had rejected the joy and embraced all the sorrow.

The sadness, the pitch, the heartfelt pain
Was nothing but the happiness I had slain.
And today when I lay in my loneliness,
I look back and see all I have is regrets!

But is this all my life is worth?
Either live in the fantasy or count my loss?
Then I look around and see a charming butterfly,
And oh! Is that a rainbow I see in the sky?

Is it love in your eyes that I see?
And are you smiling solely for me?
And this warmth that I feel deep in my heart,
Was that what I was ignoring from the start?

When the blindfold from my eye is taken away,
And as I learn to live in my today,
Everything is life seems so nice and perfect!
Can?t believe this part of life was so neglected.
 
Posted on 08-10-05 11:31 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Not caring was 'was' or what 'exists',
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oops please read as --not caring WHAT was ot what exists
 
Posted on 08-10-05 12:33 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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लाखों वार जान कुरवान कर देंगे
तुम्हारी केवल एक मुस्काहट पर
प्यार ना तो सहि नफ्रत ही सहि
एक बार मुस्कुराओ तो सहि. :p
 
Posted on 08-10-05 5:33 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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"Is it love in your eyes that I see?
And are you smiling solely for me? "

Twiste hai ta.

In my eyes,could it be love - or lust?
I'll tell you if you know - must;
In my eyes,could it be love or lust?
These are just words, plese don't trust;

It is both and more, that you can not see.
My my smile is for your fren sitting next to thee. ;)

Baki pachi...

Hehe. Bhandya ni. Anyways, mo gaye tauko dukho.
Khai "Nice" bhanne manche bepatta cha. Baru dadaG le thaha bhe khabar garde hune :(. Ke furthio hamlai. Sauteni ama ko chora jastai garcha hamlai. :(.

Haha. Aiight Later.;)

In jest,
IndisGuise:)
 
Posted on 08-10-05 6:24 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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वाह वाह! पुष्पपुरी!
तालियाँ तालियाँ!!

घचक गयो नि। अरु नि दिम् न फिरि।

>>Khai "Nice" bhanne manche bepatta cha. Baru dadaG le thaha bhe khabar garde hune :(. Ke furthio hamlai. Sauteni ama ko chora jastai garcha hamlai. :(.
मलाई भुन्या हो?
Herum jhulkinchhan ki.
Ani kasle, kaslaai sauteni Amako chhora jasto garyo भन्या?

In jest,
:)

 
Posted on 08-10-05 10:05 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Is it love in your eyes that I see?
And are you smiling solely for me?
And this warmth that I feel deep in my heart,
Was that what I was ignoring from the start?


awww...very nice ..beautiful!! Anj..yup u gave the positive ending :)
 



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