Dear friends, I would like to thank everyone for reading my story. But due to unavoidable circumstances I cant continue later, I hope you enjoyed/ or (got irritated) whatever I had presented. Your comments have always encouraged me to write more.

I have already written few more parts but was reluctant to add. I somehow felt it was too personal. J hos ahilelai bhane yettikai ma bida hunchhu yo thread bata.

---------dheari dherai dherai dhanyabad to  all friends of Sajha and especially those who directly motivated by dropping comments-------

Amazing!

This is intersting. I never had those beautiful experience craft a story.

Hope to read more... !

Jhilke bro,

A sentimental plot it was... a complete different flavor this time compared to your last story. 2 Fs (feeling and flow) make it a good read. Waiting eagerly to read remainder of the plot.... 

कठैबरा हाम्रो झिल्के! मुगलान छिरेको कथा ल्याएछ!

छिटो गर यार गोरखपूरमा पुगेर के के भयो??

धेरै पटक घरबाट बिदाइ भये तर त्यो दिन जस्तो मेरो मुटु टुक्रा टुक्रा कहिल्यै भएको थिएन, शायद पहिलोपटक भएर होला।...

सत्य कुरा लेख्यौ Amazing, , पहिलो पटक घर छोड्दा को अनुभब साह्रै नरमाइलो हुने है,   मेरी आमा केही बोल्न नसकी  मेरो टाउको कपाल सुम्सुम्याइ रहनु भएको त्यो पहिलो घर छोड्दा को क्ष्ण सम्झिदा अझ नि आँखा रसाएर आउछ।  

कथा राम्रो छ, हामी सबै को वास्तविकता झल्काउने, भलै डेस्टिनेसन सबै को गोरख्पुर नहोला- -  

 ल अरु भाग हरु  पनी छिट्टै पढ्न पाइयोस।

 

झिल्के ब्रो, कक्षा ८ को भुगोल र तेस्ले थोपरेका जिज्ञासाहरुले जीवन गोरेटोलाई निक्कै नै आकर प्रकार दिएका छन। तिम्रो कारोणिक जीवन कथा अरु धेरै कथा हरुसंग झन्क्रित भएर पर पर सम्म गुन्जिएको छ। अरु छिट्टै थप्छौ भन्ने अभिलाषा छ।

Dippu Sathi Thanks :-)  Im v glad that u read it, ani khoi ta timile katha lekhya aajkal?  kina sarai busy ho ki kya ho :-)  Ani How is this part? Comment lekha hai..
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Som bro,  I was expecting your comment with a wonderful song :-) Thanks for comment BTW  :-)

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Harke Bro, Shatabdi ma chadhya ho?

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Piya Spring, Thansk for comment, it means a lot to me. Ghar ko yaad aayo ki Maiti ko? hahah Please padhdai garnu la :-)

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Gogol bro, U rock yaar, Im always delighted to see u in my thread. I completely forgot to renew our old Jali thread and i heard u got scholorship for some programme,  aakhir JALI nai paryo LOL congrats yaar....

Dhimar bro/sis, thanks a lot, Im v happy that u liked it. Abt ROSE, I will try to update in near future, please stay tuned hai. Thanks again.
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Chiple bro, jindagi nai beiman chha yaar LOL
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Crazy Dear, Thanks a lot, but im big fan of yr stories (like everyone)  willl u please share  some tips to make story wonderful?  Fees pani dinchhu ke , free hoina  :-)
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Nepche brother,  Im touched with your comment, life is like this yaar, there was no other option than just to face those odd times and now here just tyrin to express through Sajha. Thanks bro for readin.
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Birkhe Dai, Muglaan ta pasiyo tara dherai dukha paaiyo ni k garnu tara mardako chhorale himmat hardaina ni hoina ra? aakhir Birkhe jasto Dai payepachhi k ko dar ni, hoina ta bro?
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Prerana, what a lovely song. Thanks for the same. yep so true those moments r always painful even to remember, hoina ta? Too hard to be away from family and esp from dear mom. So u did cry a lot?

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Suntale bro, Many thanks for being so kind and droppin few words of appreciation. And thanks a lot for your true wish .
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And Thanks everyone for viewin this thread

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"एक मनले रिस पनि उठ्यो त्यो फर्सी भन्दा ठुलो टाउको" hasaayo sathile

sathi truely awesome writing. Especially the plot and the way you have provided the minute details. waiting eagerly to read more.......

Amazing Bro, You are not from ..JA, are you? But sounds like you are.
Your story is just touching. The second part (part of it) resembles with my life so closely, I felt revisiting my own school life.
Keep it up.
Just like your name, AMAZING.
GOGOL.

Amazing Bro,

                 Mannnnn that was another nice part. i like the way you present your story and  it is also hearthrobing,, post the next part soon.

फर्सी भन्दा ठुलो टाउको - -  bichara paunu dukha paa raihecha sathi le  jindagi ma  

Amazing. I mean it!

झिल्के ब्रो,

 मैले भनेकिम नि साझाबाट BYE   भन्दा कुन चै दिन फेरी अर्को कथा लिएर आउनुहुन्छ----

कहिले रुवाउने कहिले हसाउने  कथा पो रहेछ --धन्यवाद!

Jhilke,  mero comment khoi ke bhayera got deleted  from here... Few para up there are real heart-touching..  Keep posting la..

झिल्के कान्छो,

म त भर्खरि मेला बाट फर्केको ,धान रोपेर आको
अहिले पोलेको मकै र फर्सी को साग खाँदै अनी अल ईन्डिया रेडियो हिन्दी चलचित्र को गीत सुन्दै तलाई चिथी लेख्दै हो,साजन फिल्म को साजन के अन्खेमे प्यार भन्ने गीत बजिराहछ

साह्रै खुशी लाग्यो तिम्रो यो धागो को अर्को भाग पढदा!तेरो लेखेने स्टाईल राम्रो रहेछ अरु पनि लेख्दै गरेस!
कुरुप बनएका  'गुप्त यौन रोगका इलाज मुफ्तमे ' जतासुकै त्यस्तै बिज्ञापन मात्रै थिए। यो पढ्द त सारै हसयो लाग्यो यार

Sathi D :-)  thanks, your comment always brings smile on my face.
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GG bro,  though Im not from ..JA, my heart is always there. Very glad that it reminded of your good old days, JaisiDanda bata tala jahreko yaad aayo? Ani tyo Matribhumi school ma kheleko yaad aayo hola hoina? how abt playing caromboard at Lampata in tiffin break? Re kyaa.....
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Dhimar bro, thanks for message yaar, m happy that u liked it again. Will post next one soon la. Keep rocking.
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Prerana, Jindagi nai dukha dukhamaa bitlaa jasto chha, ajhai chhodya hoina dukhale.....Khai bhagya nai yesto ho ki? and thanks for comment la.

Joshit bro, I know :-) Thanks again

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मिस सिस, अब मैले के भनम र खै, हउरले भन्नु भाथ्यो क्यारे चमेलिको कथा लिएर आउनेनै छौ भनेर, सच्चै मास्टरनि नानी लाई आफ्ना चेलाहरुको सबै कुरा थाहा हुन्छ। धन्यवाद प्रतिकृयाको लागि।

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Spring The Piyaa, ma ta mero account ko password Spring ko Dushmanle payechha ani timro comment delete garechha bhanera kasto aatteko ni LOL. thanks for comment again.

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Jetha,   wow great to hear from you, I will write u long letter soon, gau ghar tira ko khabar ko barema ...tille then bye hai ta .Thanks for comment  Light-2 bro

Many thanks to all the readers...

For the last few days, Ive gone really lazy, will update very soon.

khali "thank you" note matra update garne ho amazing le?

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Amazing bro, interesting chha.
Many people around my mamaghar went to Delhi to work. I used to think about going there. Thank god, I didn't go.

Jhilke, it's going great.. you reminded me  of couple of things as well..I mean that reading habit

waiting for more about Delhi.

Spring THE Piyaa  lol..Even  I thought some dushman of mine did that but fortunately it was some technical problam