okay, everyone, let's have some fun!
here is my kabita....

"Hijo Raati"
Paani aayo
Jaado bhayo
Eklai thiye
Raksi piye
Lotne, matne
Tapai laai dhatne
Maile tyattikai lekhe
Sapana matra dekhe....

Je payo tyo, baula jasto
kich kich gareko kaan kahyo
surendras ko poem le
mero priya yaad aayo
she's right there, not too far
i can go see her, drivin in a car
moon shining with the star
i call and talk
love to take a walk
write her name with a chalk
till the end! and ever

सार्है राम्रो कविता रैछ हाम्रो,
तर स्वाद चाहि पर्यो अलि चाम्रो।
आएँ यता बाटो बिराइ,
लेख्दैछु केहि डराइ डराइ॥॥(तातो चिजसंग रे क्या ;०)

के लेख्ने सोच्दै दिन बित्यो,
बस्दा बस्दा पाइन्टै च्यात्यो।
रिसले मैले एल टि पिएँ,
मेरो वोसलाइ अनि दनक दिएँ॥॥

एउटा जागिर नि खुस्कि गयो,
यो केटो अब बेरोजगार भयो।
दिनभरि साझामा लेख्दै बस्छु,
कवि बन्न कम्मर कस्छु॥॥

ल जा त रे क्या,
मैले रेस जिते कि क्या हो नराम्रो कविताको रे क्या, ;०)
निर्माण

Real bad one -

All women I want
kicks me to the curve
sometime I wonder
wot did I do to deserve
I told her I love u
she slapped me twice
I told her I'd do anything
she ask me to drive
took her to the pub
she drank like fish
ask asked me for the car key
I ended up washing the dish

nirman, fantastic! and nescient, your poem, the love of which you spoke was so profound and so vivid and so piercing....i can only hope that one day you are reunited with your pyaro ghiroula! (;-D)

ani surendras, where in palpa are you from? tansen bazaar ki? i lived in chirtungdhara vdc, a little to the east of tansen....

la, my first bad poem of the day....
ahile ma yehi chhu, work maa
naramailo chha, hai. my boss is a jerk ta!
ani hushpupply le jiskauna khojdai
maile chahi arko thread maa lekhna rojdai
tyasaile mero reply dhilo bhayo
tara, hushpuppy, timi le harayo
mero kabita le jityo
timro kabita tyattikai bityo

la, enough for now....

kool thread.... liked it

Life is green.
Money is green
Trees and greass are green
Jealousy is green
Green is like velvet.
Green is pure
Green is soft and mellow.
Green is .........
i don't know anymore

Palpali bhaiya, looks like am not the only one who liked this. Hehe.

Maan dukhyo,
mutu futyo,
pizza khaye
meeting bata ayee

Ramailo bhayo
manche chinnu payo
Sathi haru ghumna arko sahar gaye
Ma chai kaam le yehi rahe.

ghar bata mail naako dherai bhayo
aja ke cha bhanera sodnai paryo
aja mero DVD due cha
natra bhaye fine tirnu parcha.

"Manis thulo dille huncha jata le hundaina"
Ego thulo bhaat le huncha laat le hundaina.

Momo nakhako dherai bhayo,
samjanda mukh pani pani bhayo
Aba ekchin sochdaichu
Katha lekhnu basdaichu.

Jai nepal ;)

good one, indi! you must get a lot of mail....you mention it in each kabita!

la, for badarni....
timi pheri aayo
mero maan ta khusi bhayo
ramro photo haru post garne
maile timro greencard faram bharne.... (;-D)
ma sanga palpa ghumna jau na
ani hamro palpali chukauni khau na
la, ahile laai yatti ho, matey
pachhi pheri lekchhu, hai, badarnikt!


here's another one, just for gits and shiggles....
roses are red, violets are blue
some poems rhyme. some don't.

la, enjoy.....

kathmandu ko toriko tel
yo maya ko kasto khel
ma aaye yataa
uni gaeinn utaa,
khoi ke bhannu bhannu
hamro maya preeti kata kata...

hijo rati dekheko
aja deuso lekheko
Timro bau le thaha payera
jhandai malai pitheko

bhok lagyo malai
khana maan chaina
Timilai napaaye
timri bahini chodne chaina
( aakhir saliii pani ta aadhi gharwali hunchan bhancha)
tesaile kanchiii,
timi aauchau ki Arkai bihe garum

आहा कति रमाइला कविताहरु। पाल्पाली गाउँलेलाई धन्यवाद। म पनि भाग लिउँ है त यो धागोमा।

अँ, काममा जान रेल चढें
वाटोमा घाम लाग्यो
एकछिन पछि बतास चल्यो
रेल भित्र घामै लागेन
बतास पनि चलेन
छेउमा एउटी वहिनी चढिन
पछि पछि एउटा दाइ आए
कस्ता रमाइला गफ गरे
म सुनेर वसिरहे
उनिहरुलाई हेरेर म दङ्ग
स्टेशन कटिसकेछ म त झसङ्ग
ओर्लें र फेरी उल्टो बाटो चढें
अफिस पुग्दा अलि ढिलो भयो
तर आजको यात्रानी रमाइलो भयो
घाम नलागेनि घमाइलो भयो।

Red is wild.
Red is warm.
Red is loud.
Red is bringt.
Red is dangerous.
Red is color of blood.
Red is warm & sticky.
Red smells like roses.
Red is strong.
Red speaks of courage.


palpali gaula ji nice poem. Thank you much

la ta....

mero dimag ta bigrina lagyo
meri sundari arkai sanga bhagyo
ahile ta ma eklai bhayechhu
maile thulo alu khayechhu
sayad kina yasto bhayo?
malai ta kati ruaayo
ahile ta ekdam jhau lagne
mero hakim sanga ajhai paisa maagne
rent pani tirna sakdina
mero jeevan naramailo, badarni bina....

(;-D)

Duita ma ta bhane palpaliG. Kaha bata aunu, naayera ta chatpati cha ;).

Ajai mero sali lai po ankha lauda raicha. Babababa. Lala.

Palpali le sali lai ankha layo
Maile basera gana gayoo
Katha lekhna basda alchi lagyo
Adda lekhera hold ma rakhyo

Bich ma ekchin 'class' ni rakham hai?
Natra yesto kabita kasle padcha khai.

Padde le yedi paddaina bhane
Lekhne le matra garne ke?
"Nanga ko desh ma gayera
Dhobi le paucha kaam ke?"

Dum dum dummer
machkai deu kammar
timi mero salo
timro dd le malai falo.
sel roti khanu pau
ekchin lai bida pau.

Copyright: IndisGuise;)

Bombai oothyo mara mari hindu, musalman ko
supari rahas lay khaya, ranga basyo paan ko

okay, aaja ko last ho yo....

indi dai, tapai le ke bhanne?!
mero khutta kina tanne?!
hajur sanga sidhha kura matra
maile padheko tapaiko patra
ani ahile ta jaana thalechhu
hudaina bus park tira, balaju
mero dera tira
tara jaane bhanda pahila
ubhiera pisab garne, hoina ma ta mahila

la, bholi bhetaun la....

my turn

i am done with egg jam
i need to watch the movie "hey ram"
what r u peeps doing
my roomie is snoring

lol, she will kill me

now what do i do?
where is redstone moo
what should i write next
to make my poem DUNNO

Ok try topping this one :D :D

हिजो जन्?म्?यो आज हुर्क्?यो भोली मर्नु पर्नु पर्ने
केहि गर्छु भन्?या कुरा कहिले हो गर्ने

दुख्?ख सुख्?ख सबै भोग्?न बिदेश मा आको
थाहा नपाई कति चाडो यो समय गा को

बिदेशमा बसे पनि देश को लाग्?छ माया
मिठो लाग्?छ आफ्?नै गाम को चौतारीको छाया

Prem Charo
Hawaii :)

ghar aaye
toilet gaye
disa pisab gare
aaina here
dari bhadeko rahe chha....
teslai kate
toilet bhata niske
(phone ko ghanti bhaji rako rahechha)
Phone uthaye
aadha ghanta kura gare
phone garda gardai
Sorry wong number bhanera rkhidiyo
mata jilla pare........

meera Posted on 05-04-05 5:14 PM Reply
y turn

i am done with egg jam
i need to watch the movie "hey ram"
what r u peeps doing
my roomie is snoring

lol, she will kill me

now what do i do?
where is redstone moo
what should i write next
to make my poem DUNNO

Ok try topping this one :D :D

CAN'T TOP THAT MEERA THAT'S THE WORST EVER
JESUS
THAT IS THE CRAP

Lol, does that mean i win the title for the worst poem of the year?

Palpali Gaunle, u were the creater of this thread so where's my prize?

lemme trying something (more) worst:

And i am here trying to write a poem
nothing ever comes to my mind
And Bhattu replies in sentences
which he/she pretends to be a poem

In this particular poem no sentences rhyme
And dunno

lol, what say u of this poem?

ल कति रामरो म पनि कोरू

HONG KONG ma kalo bhaisee ko traffic jam
khau bhane din bhari ko sikar yehi ho kaam
mukh ma ram ram aakash ma astayo ghaam
hunalagyo mero jindagi ma chamtaar ko kaam
hijo saama thiye kadki ahile bhaye jhan kaangal
baru hijo ko thik thiyo haal thiyo kaamse kaam maya ko paal
ahile na maya na chaya baas mero jindagi behaal
naa taa aucha kaal bhayo jindagi makuri ko jaal
aba ta saajha ma aauna baki cha tsunami ko chaal