FInally its here most awaited MV of this fall BEDANA a presention of NEPOPrecords Subaa ft. Supoks.......https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lYAYVU9N8o8

Most awaited??? who waited for this?? lol

 गीत चैनी बेदना रे, सुनेर रुनै मन लग्ने शब्द! केटी ले लगाको लुगा हेर्यो भने किन किन आङ नै सिरिङ्ग हुन्छ, कता कता कुत्कुती लाग्या जस्तो, हास्न पो थालेँ बाइ म त! 

 Hey prabhu.. vocals chai kina yesto kawad.. keti ko chak chai sirippa.. kati focused hau.. 

Good Job Subash!

केटी को अनुहार भन्दा पछाडि को भाग नै बदी focus गरेको देख्दा लाग्छ यो कुनै C लेवल को हिन्दी फिल्म को प्रोमो हो !

सुधार गर्न पर्ने ठाउँहरु नभएको होइन, तर पनि प्रयास राम्रो छ, अब आउने भिडियोहरु अझ स्तरीय हुँदै जाउन्, शुभकामना... 

Camera man Seems to be a pervert..why is he focusing more on her azz then her face?

this is indie type music video. I like it. Try to give more amateurish look to your upcoming videos, I'll keep 'liking'.. all of them. lyrics ma 'kasari baachu(live) ' bhanda, kasari bhaachu(break).. po sunido rahecha(ha ha ha).. ali nepali para mai, dherai swang nagari gaayema, dherai ramro huney thiyo.
I'm sharing it on my facebook :D 

On the contrary, I think the cinematography and edit was done well enough.

I like the flow, but I'd question the vocalist ability to sing it well. The lyrics also seems a little mundane.

Also, could there be a little more Nepaleseness? For a second I thought both were reggaeton stars.The girl looked clearly out of sorts, and her mannerisms were highly affected or perhaps coerced.

Overall a fair effort, there are ample opportunities for improvement.

 "कसरी बाचु म "---गीत चाँही sad type ko, Video ma keti ko "Chaak Dekhaune" ? 
Ali simple tarikale prastut gareko bhaye ramro hune thiyo...

"this is indie type music video. I like it. Try to give more amateurish look to your upcoming videos, I'll keep 'liking'.. all of them. lyrics ma 'kasari baachu(live) ' bhanda, kasari bhaachu(break).. po sunido rahecha(ha ha ha)."

The less said about the video, the better. If people are so uncomfortable singing in Nepali or don't have command of the language and vocabulary, why not simply sing it in English?

Looking into baachu sounding like bhaachu doesn't surprise me in today's nepali society. If you listen to Kantipur's news presenters, they can't even say "cha" anymore. They make it sound like "Sa". Only people that could relate to that must be the SMS gals of yesteryears :).  I don't know who has instilled this idea in us that speaking with a "forced-accent" makes us sound better than simply speaking Nepali.

Right on the money Pulsar. As I revisited it again, the entire song looks affected, with feigned emotions and few forced accent as you mentioned. But then perhaps Kishor Limboo could provide a little more insight on this, he recently wrote an interesting article about Hindi music's invasion in Nepalese culture, I'd like to listen more about Westernization of Nepalese music as well.

My take is simple, sing like an American when you sing a Pearl Jam number, but when singing in Nepali, kindly sing like Kumar Basnet, it depicts our tradition more effectively.

 

Hmm good song. Good voice, and even better presentation. Good Job.

 Suru ma ali naramro hola ki jasto lageko thyo, tara purai sune pachi ramro lagyo. Keep it up. 

Video was pretty good
Lyrics was not bad
Rhythm was fair

Actors were OK.. the singer actor wasn't the greatest looking though...
Voice sucked.

overall I have seen worse.. this was not too bad!

The song is good I give 5/5 for the effort. To all the fu((kin haters. I bet that you have never created anything in your entire life. I bet that you sit in front of Fox/Zee/Sony TV and watch American or Indian Idol and Saregama and think you know everything about music to post degrading comment about our fellow Nepali brother trying to create a good music. That's the fu((kin typical Nepali mentality that cannot encourage any creativity and instead bash the looks of the singer. So either go and create something meaningful or fu(k yourself.
Having said that I have couple of suggestions for the creators. You did a good job and I bet with right mindset you can create something really wonderful. Forget the haters in this thread and take that as an challenge to create something really wonderful.  
Here are some of my feedbacks:
Lyrics is pretty good. I don't know much about rapping but seems pretty OK. Music is decent.
Story is very harsh. I would brighten it a little bit more. People already have so many problems with their life. They don't want to see a sad story.
Video is kind of raw. I would have liked to see the guys attire a little refined. It didn't jive well that the girl was a hottie while her boyfriend's looks (from behind) was unpolished. I don't know maybe that was the intention in the video. Also the previous comment that the girl's ass is focussed more should be taken into consideration. It makes the girl look kind of cheap. 
Once again good effort from you guys and hope that in the future we will get to see you guys make some more good songs.  

One more thing for the haters. Obviously the guy put the music up for free in Youtube and you're not paying for it either. He and his crew must have spent their time and resources to make this video happen. The least you can give them is some constructive critisism. So if you don't have anything constructive to say to them then rather don't say it. In fact I wonder if you haters ever supported Nepali music. How do you expect Nepali artists to make it big if you don't support it? Arun Thapa, Narayan Gopal, Bhatkta Raj Acharya all lived and died in poverty because of the lack of support for their profession. With the talent they had, they should have been living like Kings in Nepal. Fu(k you all buddhi nabhaka sala ho..

Wow fountaindew, does it always have to be personal? I am not a hater, I just called spade a spade! But you cussing out others - is that mature? Kindly ask yourself!

  Rapper sang in a low scale that made this song better. Good that you did not sing through your nose like the last video(forgot the name of the song).