Wow, another great piece. Thanks for sharing.  

Nepche Sathi, so touchy and as usual fantastic poem!!!!

la arko dhamakeydar poem aisekeycha --haina kasto fururururru furnasakya ho-- Nkchora Gazabcha la yo pani!

Yakku,

Thank you very much for your generous comment. 

Dipika,

I am indebted for your inspiring words. Thank you very much, friend.  

Pjna,

Thank you very much for the inspiring words. I am glad that you liked this piece too.

 

Although I don't have answer for
all of life's problems, doubts, or fears.
But still I will listen to you,
feel your ache and wipe your tears.

हो त नि, ठिक भन्नु भयो तपाइले।  कस्तो राम्रो एक्स्प्रेसन।

म पनि यो कपेर च्याङ्बालाइ पठाँउछु है नेप्चे ज्यु?

उसले बुझेन भने भोटे भासामा उल्था गरिदिनु है ल?

CL ज्यु,

प्रशंसा का ति दुई शब्दहरु को लागी म आभार प्रकट गर्दछु। "एक्स्प्रेसन" मन परेको सुन्दा मलाई पनि खुशी लाग्यो। पढेर प्रतिकृया दिनु भएकोमा धन्यवाद छ।  
हाहाहा, च्याङबा लाई पठाउने रे? ल भै हाल्छ नि। अब उस्ले बुझेन भने पो गाह्रो पर्ने भो त। आफुलाई भोटे भाषा आउँदैन त।

Oh yeah, can I send this poem to my gf too? I am sure she will like it as she liked your last poem.

Nepal ko Chora...

If i were to be able to write like you. i could have easily made this girl fall for me again that once used to be my GF. I need a poem to make a bitter relationship work....

ChiBears

Nepal ko Chora...

If i were to be able to write like you. i could have easily made this girl fall for me again that once used to be my GF. I need a poem to make a bitter relationship work....

ChiBears

NKC, another nice one..kya ramro....:) Waiting for more..

Nice one.. Did ya write this? If yes then here is something for you

 

I can't give solutions to all of life's problems, doubts, or fears.
But I can listen to you, and together we will search for answers

I can't change your past with all it's heartache and pain,
nor the future with it's untold stories.
But I can be there now when you need me to care.

I can't keep your feet from stumbling.
I can only offer my hand that you may grasp it and not fall.

Your joys, triumphs, successes, and happiness are not mine;
Yet I can share in your laughter.

Your decisions in life are not mine to make, nor to judge;
I can only support you, encourage you, and help you when you ask.

I can't prevent you from falling away from friendship,
from your values, from me.
I can only pray for you, talk to you and wait for you.

I can't give you boundaries which I have determined for you,
But I can give you the room to change,
room to grow, room to be yourself.

I can't keep your heart from breaking and hurting,
But I can cry with you and help you pick up the pieces
and put them back in place.

I can't tell you who you are.
I can only love you and be your friend.

 Yakku,

I am glad to hear that your gf liked the earlier poem. And, if you think she will he happy again, then feel free dude. 

bears23,

I don't know what to say but it sounds kinda weird to me that the a poem can affect the relationship so deeply. You may be surprised to hear that I started writing when I was going through rough time in my life. Why don't you try writing something youself? I hope she will be happy to read something that comes out straight from your heart. I hope things will work out for you. Good luck !!

Sndy Dijyu,

Thank you very much for those encouraging note. I will try to bring more pieces in coming days.

Nepkanchhi,

Yeah, I had typed those lines couple of days ago.  

Your reply is simply awesome. Those are nicely decorated words. Good job. I feel rewarded to have those lines dedicated to me.  Looking forward to reading more from you.

A short thank you note for you...

Thank you for such a lovely gift;
Thing like that gives my spirit a lift.
I feel honored and it's my pleasure;
It’s your thoughtfulness that I treasure.

Thanks again !! 

Does it make you happy if I say ...I would like to dedicate above verses to you as well?  ::wink::

NKC, keep on writing bro, you've a wonderful writing skill. another nice one! Who is this for

नेप्चे पाट ल दाsssमि  गा' रइछ है
मलाई नि लव गरु गरु जस्तो लाग्यो यार यो कबिता पढेर त

Kanchha and Rithhe bro,

Thank you very much for boosting comments.

ओ हो नेप्चेभाइ  कइता त मजाओ रे'छ । मलै नि तिम्रो भेनालाइ चिटी लेकुम लेखुमलाओ तिम्रो कइता पढेर

लेख्दै जाऊ हामी पढ्दै जान्छौ है त ---:)

Nepche, thanks so much..

Your thank-you note is simply awesome

मिस दिदी,

हजुर को कुरा सुन्दा मलाई पनि खुसी लाग्यो। गुलियो शब्दको लागी धेरै धेरै धन्यवाद। लेख्नुस् न हजुर पनि, अनी हामी पनि पढ्ने।

Nepkanchhi,

You are most welcome. I am glad to hear that you found the "thank you note" awesome. Looking forward to reading more from you.

नेप्चे,
यो कबिताको खोलाँ अलि दिन भो बाढी आको छ आको छ --शिराँ को दर्क्यो प्रभो?

बाढी तर गडगडार आको छ लान्छ बगाएर कस्कस्लाई चैं --