pardon the typos....repitition of "store" in the first paragraph and "ashtonishment"...a hasty work always has flaws.

hehe...glad that i took a break ..to check if anything up here re kya ;oP hehe....


John..is being repetive a flaw?:o| ...just 2 words? and i 'feel' so much in that line u wrote..?:o|

dyam..if its a flaw..dyam dun freak me out!!cos dyam i have flawed limitless!!but wat scares me is that i wont stop!!hah ;oP hehe....

and well hastiness...most of us always feels that hoina?well i do :oD..hope others are having a bit more peace ;o)..tho 'peace' (seclusion which we try to hard to achive) is a bit overated to me re kya...well hit me baby anytime re kya ;oP..then be be secluded from the world ;oP hehe..gonna be be with oneself one day..so might as well see wat the world has to offer hoina?;oP hehe...

anyways sheesh!!just wanted to say cheers for sharing :oD..and if u did it in haste that just shows the willingness to share asap ;o) hehe...so cheers for tryn re kya ;o)....

and well wat can i say about what u shared?im speechless(yap i am!!hard to believe hoina? hehe...which does happen when i do read..but not just read anything hai ;oP hehe)...was readin it with "boys dun cry" (the cure ko song i think hehe) tune ringing in me head...and warriors wont give up ni ;o)..im sure shes a lot better then wat we smtimes think ;oP hehe....

no idea if she is like wat u made her out to be..but yap im sure ur words did more than 'justice' to her ;o)..tho u werent tryn to 'impart' any 'justice' ;oP hehe... def a character we love to have around hoina?(i would hehe)...and well like it or not..sheesh!!wats wrong with guys hopin the other woman of their life is like their mum?i mean duh!!get over the jealousy ladies!!;oP hehe...guys just wanna be loved and showered with love like their mum does hoina ;o)..sheesh!!;oP...plus well wat will u say when u have a son..and ur son hopes to have a wife like his mum?close to her?duh!!!;oP...

we are just humans!!!not perfect..but alright ;o)..so treat us right re kya ;oP hehe...and hopefully u get treated right too :o| ..but oh well..boys will be boys ;oP...hehe...

and cheers for sharing again John..:oD...and hehe dun mind me sayn this..but couldnt u make it easier for us by puttn ur name behind the title too...now now dun be too critical!!cos critics are there everywhere re kya ;oP...just for once hear me pleas re kya ;oP hehe....

good day :oD..

(ps am kinda hopin deep inside that u do write about the meetn with her and her hubby ;o)..think that be quite nice eh?;o) hehe)

Dear Mr. Galt, what Dannyboy has proposed sounds of perfect sense to me, you certainluy are on of the few writers along with Sitara we woudnt like to miss out on.Therefore , it would be very convenient for us ... the way Sitara does it ke.In fact there was this guy in a recent thread ,who asked about the whole purpose as to why she does have her nick at the back. Wud ya do the same then?

Enjoyed the read. I think i might have known a few gals like that. :) Art imitating life.

gone with the wind....

What the life holds for us...We never know!!!
Some Consequences, some places, some peoples all takes part...and we don't remain the same...Even the shadows and objects fall apart,let alone be the ideologies...
Nicely written John...Indeed Very Nicely....
Hajir chahin Dhila bho...:)
Hope to write some of my experience soon...But the HOPE floats...just in distant horizon...:)
Nirman~*

Hey JG!!!

This is the best one I read so far of your entire collection.

The last sentence is just awesome- breathtaking!!! One word for your last sentence-
"IMPECCABLE"!!!

Remind me of Paarijat's writing from men's perspective- yours is just a reverse in BDC.

Detouring Sajha!!!
HD

Anonymous,

Thanks for reading, one of the primary reasons of this post is I adore women in control. Be they a nun or a hooker, an innocent belle or a bellicose virago, as long as they know what they are doing, they are worth respect. Women are more sensitive and physically weaker than men, it is a known fact, despite this, if they have guts to take on to the world and give a hard time to the stronger sex in terms of intelligence, wit and hardwork, they are definitely worth applause.

They only reason I find them despicable is when they try to feign their identity and exhibit what they are not. Read my previous post "Miss Americanos" here at sajha, it was posted last year and is a sharp contrast to what I have written above.

The reason I do not print my pseudonym behind my posts is I am "not in control" like Sitara. Once again, she is a perfect epitome of an equipoise female, hardly has any flaws and thus demands a little attention. My posts are mere imitation of various books and from Sitara's too...therefore I dare not print my nick following my post.

O'hara,
did I answer your question right?

Nirman,
what a witty saying "Even the shadows and objects fall apart,let alone be the ideologies".
Yes, we never know what future has in store for us.....better be a flowing water which negotiates every bends and curves than be an obdurate rock which is ever stationary. Call me a fool, but sometimes I prefer to be latter.

hiya humdrum,
yes, parijat...how could I not mention such a multifacted writer. Her story was not as simple as mine, it was made of many dimensions which ordinary readers find hard to comprehend. "मैले नजन्माएको छोरो" starts from where this story ends, provided komal was not married at all. This story is more of a sexual identity crisis rather than a phobia of infertility.

JG...

Please do not take my comments of Paarijat in the wrong way. I did not, not even try, to correlate your BDC to any literary products of Paarijat, rather trying to make a bridge between two thinking. Men writing from Women's perpective (the sentiments of female you potray here despite being a male), and the similarity of Paarijat style (if you have read Sirish ko Phool, how she wrote that one on Men's shoes: however, she is a single lady all her life). That is the case....!!!

That's the reason I am so lost on your last sentence. So neat thinking despite you being male.

HD

John, that was one nice piece I have ever read that actually flows like words in Dr. Dre's mouth.
ehe!!

Isn't our heart crazy? It's always empty. Reminds me of school/college days in Nepal. A girl mistakenly smiles at you, or talks nicely with you and you feel like she loves you. And one monday (bloody monday) she talks to you about her latest crush or her newfound boyfriend, and this pang of jealousy hit you so hard that you really wanna cry? eh...

Freakin' jealous son of a gun's... ehe.

my sincere apologies humdrum,

I had मैले नजन्माएको छोरो in mind while I was replying your post. Yes, my thoughts are symmetrical with that of parijat in this context if not the same. She was a silent feminist who spoke only in her literary works. I am honored that you somehow managed to link my perspective with regards to her.

On a further note, I am in awe of how well you care about petty details such an intense replier you are.

To be honest with you, JG, I am blushing right now....!!!

I am flattered by your comments on me.

No apology- I would rather deal with a word "apologia" than the former.

Take Care!!!
HD

kalanki,

Most of the time Dre gives us the feeling he is a misogynist which I am not.

"Boys don't cry" was a movie starring Hillary Swank, which she bagged an oscar for, the entire movie is about sexual identity crisis which comes to a terrible end after a brutal discovery of she being a woman.

I do not know if this was directed towards me, but I was never in love with Komal...we only met three times, I simply liked her outspokenness.

Really Really enjoyed reading your piece John. Great work!
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Read my previous post "Miss Americanos" here at sajha, it was posted last year and is a sharp contrast to what I have written above.
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Can you provide the link for this post? I tried to look through it but in vain....

dreamz, thanks for reading....here is the link:

http://sajha.com/sajha/html/OpenThread.cfm?forum=2&ThreadID=21042

JG,

Looks like this one is building up to be a good one. Keep it coming. Its too early for any comments. But it looks good.

peace out

thanks highfly,

comments will be there for sure....for being a feminist now.

Ahhhh here he is......Something that would make be jubiliant....

Later.

thanks for the compliment bama girl...expecting to hear more from you.

There you go! I logged into sajha after a hiatus and was hoping that surely there is going to be a thread or two on John's anecdotes, and here you are!
Thoroughly enjoyed the read although I somehow find it a bit incomplete or may be I wanted to read more. This is one of those where surely you can go ahead for at least one sequel just to give it a more complete form. I am looking forward to it..keep it coming.

great one John as usual. i had to finish after i started reading but ending ma k bha k bha jasto bhayo hau! noon napogeko tarkari jasto! noon halnu na bro!

hunk and redstone....it was a hasty work as I said before....apologies.