Hello everyone,
I am applying grad school for nursing for fall semester. I am trying to write personal statement. I finished like 75% of it but still i feel like my paper is not good enough to get admission. 
please!! can you guys share your experiences with me . My topic is, "why you chose nursing as a career, your statement should address your educational and professional goals as well as your area of practice interest" And also, is there anyone studying in University of Nebraska as a grad nursing student. I just have few questions to ask.  my area of practice interest is acute care Nurse practitioner.
** can you guys suggest me please. 

Thanks...