One more piece from Nepche bro...............!!! Great yar

Is this for me?? If yes, thank you very much ...

I salute your choice of words and style of writing. Keep writing.....

 

aha aha kati ramrou -- mero bhaile pani estai bhanthyou--tara maska marnu paryou bhane hai

"But let me be what I know best,
the loving "brother", who's always there..."---kasto raamro, bhai samjhayau nepche timile---kasto sweet poem.

Myann, that's some awsome stuff. You made me remember my sister too.

mero afno sister nai chaina  but still i think i could relate to it .......nice one

mero afno sister nai chaina  but still i think i could relate to it .......nice one

This poem is probably for your big sister, ( miss_ me) isn’t it?

 nepche bhai,

 This poem has very good imagery -- simply awesome!   I wish I could get every thing you wanted your sister to have 

''For you, I can neither build 

the heaven nor catch a star pair,

But let me be what I know best,

the loving "brother", who's always there...''

nice combination of words

seriously,

I have never met you but your presence makes me feel that you really are a loving brother

keep on writing about  your   big sis ,   ok !

-sis

 

Wow! another awesome poem from NKC... 

Totally amazing! Your sis must be very proud of herself  to have a brother like you!  Best poem ever writtern for a sister. Well done!

Jhilke bro,
Thank you very much for your support.

Sadhana sis,
Yes. The poem is dedicated to all of my sisters including you. I am glad that you liked it.

Pjna,
Thank you very much for the encouraging note.   I wish I had a "sister" in "real" life so that I could "maska maring" her with these words. 

Dipika,
Prasamsa ka ti dui sabda haru prati ma aabharee chhu. Timi lai man pareko sunera malai pani khusi lagyo.

Yakku,
Thank you very much for the supportive remark.

Geico,
We are in the same boat then (I don't have any sister in "real" life too). Thank you very much for dropping by to leave a note.

Miss didi,
Yes. The poem goes to all my sisters including you who counts me as their brother. I am happy to hear that you liked those verses. "Didi, kati nata haru ragat kai ba bhaye pani, tyo bhanda pani baliyo hune rahechha".

Kancha bro,
Thank you very much for the encouraging comment. I really appreciate it.

Nepkanchhi,
Thank you very much for those boosing words. I am glad that you found the lines "totally amazing".  

"kati nata haru ragat kai na bhaye pani, tyo bhanda pani baliyo hune rahechha" nepal_ko_chora bro thats so true. i don't have a sister of my own and sometimes, infact many times, i wish i had a didi who would care/love me or a bahini for that matter whom i could care/love sooooo much and dearly. but i was and am always against the idea of making a senior or junior girl at my shool/college or a nice girl from my neighbourhood or whatever  my "sister" ......i don't know why but i never liked that idea and of course i do give them respect and love they deserve. and its a fact that this void would always be there in my life and yeah i have few very loving and caring cousin sisters. nepal_ko_chora i can totally relate how you must be feeling since we are in the same boat . damn i look with INNOCENT envy on those who are lucky enough to have sister in their life...LOL.

Also someone somewhere said that "the best thing about having a sister was that i always had a friend"

Geico bro,

Thanks for dropping by and sharing your perspective. I used to miss "sister" most during Tihar time when all the guys had colored forehead with tikas and stuffs and mine used to be blank. But yeah I do have couple of cousin sisters who have filled that void whenever they are near by.  

Dude, you don't have sister in real life and yet you came up with such a great piece. That's really awsome. Kudos to you!