Needs editing. Will re-post after editing.

What an amazing story!How can anybody acted so innocent outside yet cunning in their minds?It's scary though.
Sum off,Your narration is like that of Sidney Sheldon.What a good writer you r!Keep going!

sorry,should be act instead of acted

At this point I feel compelled to disclose to you all that this is a work of fiction. I repeat this is 100% fiction. Some freaking idiot sent me a personal email saying that I should be ethical and not write real stories. I could tell everyone who you are. But I won’t. That will be unethical. But please don’t invade my privacy by sending me personal emails. If you don’t want me to write, tell me in this thread. This freaking idiot just spoiled my day.

sum off keep on wrting...your writing is so good...i will love to read more...keep it up..

lol sum off...he spoiled your day duh, well i've got an idea...read your own posting...i am sure that will bring the smile back in your face.

well anyways.waiting for Part 3.

Great stuff, sum off. Brilliant narration. I am curious to see whether Ms Pandey comes out at the victor or the vanquished.

at = as

(Sajha should allow you to edit your own posting like other sites do ... sighs)

Thanks for the great story, sum off! Keep on writing.

sajha gazer, I think Ms. pandey's character will come out to be a victor.

gr8 story.

as all stories are .. pls do keep it close to real and for "an idiot lyk me" forgive me for spoiling ur day... that's why i always say

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what do i know )O:

wow! this is damn good! Ms. Pandey is one hell of a chaalaki. She sounds like a monster. But I have seen some ppl like that. Bichara Mr. Orangutan...sniffffff..sob...I hope he comes back handsome iin his next life.

Ms. Pandey is one nasty gold-digger. She is like those manipulating women- Komolika and what not from Hindi soap operas. "Mukh ma ram ram, bagali ma chhura". But everything is RAm Ram about your writing. Aap ka jawab nahi !!

Xena the warrior princess,
have not seen u in a while.... how r ya.

Hey SumOff, don't let some good for nothing, can't see others doing well, jealous jackss ruin your day. Needless for me to say, you have lot of fans who eagerly look forward to reading your work.

Chatmandude,
Oh now I am back to my thinking sense, I really think the guy who sent me the email was genuinely concerned that I was writing a non-fiction. I am pretty sure he is a well-wisher looking out for me. He sounds like a sincere man. I take my wrath back.

hey thapap,

not bad. how r u doing urself? I've been fighting the invaders on my island :D ..taysaile busy.

Xena,
i kinda sensed that. U need help to murdur those agressors? (O: lemme knoe? how is the summer treating u? i kinda forgot.. did u respond to my email? (O:

Kudos to sum-off. Excellent piece of (fictional?) writing. Whether its fiction or not, I demand third part and I demand it now :)

Sum_off,
You'd better write the third part soon.... I am losing my patience here... hehehhe

thapap: emails? nope, didn't get them.

man where do u get all the brain to write such an impressive piece.......it is indeed beautifully written.......do post the 3rd part...........peace