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 एउटा अपराध वोकेर भाग्दैछू
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Posted on 12-17-14 10:09 AM     [Snapshot: 11]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Wah great story

 
Posted on 12-17-14 10:15 AM     [Snapshot: 32]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Superb - Nice read
 
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वाह ! कस्तो दामी कथा सरल साधारण भाषामा . कसरि छुटेछ कुन्नि पढ्न .
 
Posted on 12-17-14 6:19 PM     [Snapshot: 425]     Reply [Subscribe]
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अति सुन्दर सदा झैँ. सधै पढ्ने मात्र गर्थे आज दुइ सब्द लेखे सायद कसैलाई केहि फरक त पर्दैन होला.
नेपाली लेखक संकर लामिछाने ले भने जस्तै लेख मा आफ्नो पन हुनु पर्छ त्यस्तै छ फुचे केटो को लेखाई/

पढ्न चुताऊ नै नहुने लेख लेख्छ. नाम चै फुचे केटो रे काम चै बुढो पाको को जस्तो गर्छ. अति सरल अनि सरसिलो भाषामा अहिले देश मा भै रहेको घटना लै यथार्थ चित्रण गरेको छ फुचे केटो को कथा ले . अनि एउटा नारी भित्र लुकेको इच्छा अनि एउटा केटा मान्छे मा लुकेको दनाबता लाई सरल भाषा मा उतारेको छ. अर्को अर्थ मा भन्नु पर्दा अहिले को युवा हरुको कथा प्रस्ट झल्केको छ FUCHEKETO को कथा मा/
अर्थ लाई अनर्थ लागेको भय मा क्षेमा चाहन्छु/

ल फुचे केटो को अरु पनि नया नया लेख हरु पढ्न पैयोस.


 
Posted on 12-19-14 4:14 AM     [Snapshot: 871]     Reply [Subscribe]
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bibas,serial- thank you..
thaney- छुटेको छैन ..पढेपछी छुट्यो भन्नै पाइएन नी ;) thank you
Gorkhali thito- I heard somewhere " Readers are the best critics", you are welcome to post any comment in my story.thank you very much for such a sweet comment
अन्य पढीदिनुहुने ,like गरिदिनुहुनेलाई धन्यवाद...
अर्को कथा यहि समाजको अर्को पात्र भेटेपछी :)
 
Posted on 12-19-14 9:25 AM     [Snapshot: 958]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Thank you Fucheketo.
Long time reader, first time commenter. You beautifully present the other side of these morally wrong stories and make them "morally ambiguous"... Keep them coming.

 
Posted on 02-03-15 9:25 PM     [Snapshot: 2786]     Reply [Subscribe]
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सार्है मिठो |
 
Posted on 02-04-15 10:14 PM     [Snapshot: 2962]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Good one fuchhe.
 
Posted on 02-04-15 10:39 PM     [Snapshot: 2971]     Reply [Subscribe]
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ramro lagyoo....
 
Posted on 03-25-15 4:29 PM     [Snapshot: 3651]     Reply [Subscribe]
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सार्है राम्रो लाग्यो, नेपाली परिबेसको एथार्थ चित्रण येति मिठो सैलिमा ..
आस गर्छु अरु पनि लेख पठन पाइयोस
 
Posted on 03-25-15 8:47 PM     [Snapshot: 3760]     Reply [Subscribe]
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After a long time I opened this thread , glad to know that its still active, After finishing this story I had great satisfaction,every story has its loopholes since the writer can not satisfy all but I am feeling good that majority of you have liked it :)
Yacc: This is one of the best analytical comment I got thank you for reading me for long time,I will try my best to open other avenues of societies as well 
Fuel tank,robwin,prem and dream big: thanks a lot for reading this story
Thanks to all the readers who read and liked this story so far 
Fuche

 
Posted on 03-25-15 9:10 PM     [Snapshot: 3782]     Reply [Subscribe]
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fucche केटो,
i was addicted to your story.
so i stopped reading it.
आज फेरी पढ्न पुगे र फेरी एक चोटी यो मन सारै खुसि भो
if i were a girl i would have fall in love with fucche keto for such a wonderful story
ध्वासे अनि arko truck driver ko story paci yo story.
padeko chu.
sabai story khoje khoje padne chu.

thank you for such a wonderful story fucche keto.
when are you planning to write a book/novel?

anyways..
tyo matokne tato alu le chai garnu gardo raicha..aba dekhi  tato alu khada kei kura samjine bhaye
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Posted on 03-26-15 1:13 AM     [Snapshot: 3883]     Reply [Subscribe]
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great as always
 
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मैले फुच्चेको कथा धमाधम मैया हरुलाई सुनाएर इम्प्रेस जमाउदै छु
लोल

 


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